Wow !!!! How beautifully you express your grief of missing your loved one at times when you feel really hurt.....
You have amazing writing skills Meena.
Loved the flow.....
Take care .

Yes meena ji Agree with alka ji you have amazing writing skills

Oh Meena.....SIGH.......This write is so beautiful and tragic at once. I always read poetry aloud and always two or three times and .....oh god you can write!

i'm pretty sure that I don't need to say the flow, word choice, emotion were perfectly balanced and for me, simply breathtaking.

it is such a relatable write and so very heartfelt I genuinly thankyou for sharing.

Dhan'yavada

Awwwhh! *Hand-to-heart-Gesture* This is so beautiful and sad! I wonder if you're speaking of one of your children? That is tough :(

You have seen me in my worst
and cheered on till I became the best,
picked me up from the deepest dirt
with a precious heart I've savored from birth,

So precious c:
A really heart-felt read.

You have executed this write very justly. This is brilliant, must have been written by the profundity of your heart. This poem has driven me towards the great pain that you had suffered. I sense great grief in all lines.... Also I sense that the one who cared you a lot has departed. Heart-touching write. 5/5

This is a beautifully written poem and immensely powerful.

A very powerful piece straight from the heart