by Maple Tree Nov 10, 2014
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Under a moon covered haze |
by Baby Rainbow
Maple really has been through the wars with this stalker of hers, however, she does well to turn events into poems! This poem is filled with the eerie tone of that spider following her, but yet she cannot see it with her own eyes. She only knows it has bitten through the aftermath of its bite. It is so true that the common fear of spiders is stemmed quite a bit from the way they move and disappear so fast, which this poem really highlights. It was a good touch to add in the poem how the author does not wish harm to any living creature, yet she finds herself unable to forgive and forget this particular species, quite rightly so. I also like the humorous ending of the weapon of murder being a boot! Great write for such a "creepy" topic. |
A Splendid Write!!! |
by Meena Krish
Under a moon covered haze |
by Rusheena
This is awesome, Andrea! I love the dynamic between the hunter and the victim and how the tables turn after the victim decides to seek revenge. As always, your imagery is stunning! I can always put myself into your scenes with no effort. Btw, I'm terrified of even the thought of a brown recluse biting me; so, the imagery added another level of fear. Thanks for that, haha. As beautiful as nature is, it can also be deadly, and that's something that we always have to be aware of. Great write! |
This stalker makes use of your greatest pleasure: moonlight rambles in the woods. Such distasteful irony! Just like a mugger in the flower garden or a cut throat in the zoo. |