Hello Andrea,

I have just stumbled upon this write. I must say, its excellent. A dark vampiric write about love and eternal life given in the form of a kiss.

The imagery and use of glass to show the translucent qualities of the undead in the moonlight is super icy cool.

I can see their dance, waltzing in the candlelight, shadows dancing along with them, carried on the swirling perfumed breezes.

Then, he kneels, and with great respect delivers the forever kiss of death.

Bravo!

Take care,

Michael x

Hi Andrea,

I love the layout of this plus the form of this poem..I like this coz I never did any Apostrophe' form/ Abstract poetry.
You did it very well a 5/5 for this

GEL