Cosmic Background Emission

I guess everyone matters for somebody. Even though it is true that the outer world is really cruel.

That is a beast of a poem. It's almost like the ending of the poem was played out as precisely as the beginning. That is very hard to achieve.

-Dean

I would add a question mark at the end since it is implied? Up to you as the author though. Interesting how the parenthesis worked, it gave the reader more insight into your thoughts and it was neat how a mind can be "static", like unfixed, no change. One other suggestion is to have the line "I started to decay" on a separate line or add ellipses to the end of it?

Good brevity in this, it was reflective and left me asking myself how I can be found. In radio waves, sound, through the voices of others...

This is so short and great! The flow you hold is amazing, it is so enjoyable to read.
A real thought provoking piece to break down.

nice one.

:)