Comments : Cosmic Background Emission

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Edited: I like it. This is something to give thought

  • 10 years ago

    by nouriguess

    :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is so short and great! The flow you hold is amazing, it is so enjoyable to read.
    A real thought provoking piece to break down.

    nice one.

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I would add a question mark at the end since it is implied? Up to you as the author though. Interesting how the parenthesis worked, it gave the reader more insight into your thoughts and it was neat how a mind can be "static", like unfixed, no change. One other suggestion is to have the line "I started to decay" on a separate line or add ellipses to the end of it?

    Good brevity in this, it was reflective and left me asking myself how I can be found. In radio waves, sound, through the voices of others...

  • 9 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    That is a beast of a poem. It's almost like the ending of the poem was played out as precisely as the beginning. That is very hard to achieve.

    -Dean

  • 9 years ago

    by Rohit Sapra

    I guess everyone matters for somebody. Even though it is true that the outer world is really cruel.