Only through darkness, can light shine. Within every scar, healing dwells.

Lovely work on this challenge, it was an interesting prompt and you created a great poem.

I like the detail of the poem, and how you connected every line together to really paint that scene for the reader .

good title choice too!

But wary be of dwelling long upon them,
else you find your own

_ I do not think this flows well, and think it should be But be wary of....

Well done.

Great poem. Its interesting how everyone used the house as something depressing.

I liked how the houses memories, time. Thats something interesting with houses. If they are not torn down, they show age, they become timeless..
You see them, and just like a trees rings it shows exactly what happened at the time...

The memories of this house seem to be... jaded... Like it wants something that it lost back.