by Dancing Rivers Nov 19, 2014
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
There comes in the night |
by Ben Pickard
Wow - I wish I could nominate this - this moved me, thoroughly. Your language and storytelling in this piece is masterful. The fact you base it on true events makes it all the more brilliant (from a reader's view anyway!) |
Thanks bennie :) |
by Baby Rainbow
Deep poem with quite a lot happening inside of it, but what is happening is so powerful and it really tells like a story as it happened and how it happened, like you are reliving it as you remember it. |
Thank you :) |
This poem is based on a true occurrence from about three years ago, in which a hooded figure came to my bedroom door one night and chanted strange words which sounded like a curse and a calling,I have never been more terrified in my life than I was that night, yet somehow I have also never felt such a moment of peace as I did when I heard the voice of my long dead mother telling me to remain calm and keep my eyes closed, her voice,I believe, saved my very soul, as I mention in the poem, my mother and those before her were involved in the craft,I know this from memories of multiple rituals and ceremonies I had witnessed as a young child, and to this day I believe that the last ceremony I ever witnessed was meant to be one of my initiation into the craft, yet my mother protected me from it then in life, as she also did in death. |