I don't get why this hasn't been commented on yet?!?!

This poem is just WOW.

I love the language you used and the way you presented it makes the reader (well me anyway) read it slowly which just add's to the gravity of the write overall.

I felt emmersed in it almost straight away, really excellent writing :)

I agree with Ben - this is an excellent piece written wonderfully.

This is excellent.
The way it read so smooth and the words you used.