This is a beautifully visual piece Karla. Each stanza jumps off the screen and creates such awesome visuals- at least for me. I loved the contrast between the black stars and barefoot dressed in white in the first stanza. I think there may be a word missing in the last line of the first stanza:

like an eagle removing its own beak to reborn.

^^to BE reborn?

It is always a pleasure to read your awesome works! But it is always so mysterious that it is difficult for me to comment properly.

XXX