by Beautiful Soul
Immense emotions fill this poem with raw wording and feelings. You did an excellent job showing the view point of this house. While I was reading this I felt like a person was talking to me. The details here are well scripted and each line holds a different image that would stand well on it's own let alone all the stanzas you connected together. Comparing a house to act like it has feelings is something I have never seen or even thought about before, but it does make sense, so much so actually. The house itself holds the most memories, because sometimes even before you or another family to move in,it holds memories of the past. You'd never expect a house to be vibrant or have emotions, but you did an excellent job in making the reader feel sad at the end when the house feel alone. Great write, nominated. . |
by CuteThingsGoneWrong
I agree with BS, The emotion here is from a person... |
by Zabadak
Really like this too, Saffie! Very different! |
Once again you knocked the prompt out of the park! I love the title so much! This house is now on death row, just awaiting to be executed. Wonderful idea. |
by silvertung69
Challenging way to have someone create. and i have to say, |