Do you remember when?

by Maple Tree   Nov 25, 2014


I was a feeder of souls
Living with trolls,
Nail bitter masquerade
Sipping on lemonade.

Soft petaled demoness,
Charcoal, chiffon dress
Lurking behind trees
As they fell to their knees.

Darkness choked on thunder
As hell became a party down under,
Innocent, I remained pure
Stalking fear, happy to lure.

A tail I've masked in danger
Penned from a memory of a stranger
Revenge is sweet, weapon is the pen
All I can say is "Do you remember when"....

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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Lol.....I love it!!!!!! You got the hidden meanings quite well! Well done, Gigggggles glad you enjoyed... Its fun to write in metaphors...

  • 9 years ago

    by CuteThingsGoneWrong

    LMAO
    Oh my god i read this poem in like 5 ways and kept going... Is she talking about??? No.. Wait... What? lol.

    aha. It made me laugh but i love corny things.

    I like how you kept it light with the rhyme scheme it worked quite well, for this at least, and it was cute! And it was very fast paced which added to the silliness of it. Its funny how well you can place words and make something ALMOST dirty so many times so quickly, and i love how you moved so freely in this. I love the feel, like your still alive almost like your on the hunt but you still get that dark feel from it.