Comments : I can't call for you, (can I?)

  • 10 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I can honestly say that this is magnificent, the way it reads, word choice, timing and everything is spot on. When it comes to love, this is the base of all of us....it doesn't matter who you are, how strong or successful, beautiful or confident we all want this from someone.

    Epic.

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Yet another stunning write from you, I especially love this one because I know the song that inspired it. I love the way there is hope and honesty in this piece. how it reaches out to the reader in its own way and lets so many people know they are not alone in feeling this way, yet there is so much ahead of them. I don't know, maybe I'm reading too much into this, but either way its wonderful.

    I especially enjoyed your concluding stanza. perfectly penned.