Red Unshifted [Mirror Etheree]

by Larry Chamberlin   Nov 26, 2014


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One
maybe
t h e`o`r y
of the cosmos
is it's a b u b b l e
ballooning out - a bulge
from some o t h e r universe
e x p a n d i n g ever so bigger
galaxies recede from e a c h other
and no one thinking i t can ever s t o p
until o n e day the distant lights shift
to b l u e coming c l o s e r to you
black h o l e s eat up galaxies
slow motioning worm holes
take matter some place
back where it was
extinguished
u n t i l
o u t
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  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Larry,

    The diamond shape looks superb. You have chosen the words well to describe the 'bubble' theory of the universe. I like the internal rhyme and alliteration.

    I know only too well how difficult these shape forms are to get right. The word choice needs to be true to the theme, shape and syllable count. No easy feat and you have achieved a marvellous poem in every way. Kudos.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very creative poem Sir. And what an eye catching poem to look at. It is very exciting to see shaped poems, and the way you pulled this particular form off to look like this must have taken a bit of effort! Well done.

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