Very creative poem Sir. And what an eye catching poem to look at. It is very exciting to see shaped poems, and the way you pulled this particular form off to look like this must have taken a bit of effort! Well done.

Hello Larry,

The diamond shape looks superb. You have chosen the words well to describe the 'bubble' theory of the universe. I like the internal rhyme and alliteration.

I know only too well how difficult these shape forms are to get right. The word choice needs to be true to the theme, shape and syllable count. No easy feat and you have achieved a marvellous poem in every way. Kudos.

Take care,

Michael