Great job. XD 5/5

That was Fantastic! I loved it! Very well-written, articulate and you definitely succeeded to paint a horrific scene in the reader's mind! It personally freaked me out! In a good way, of course. ;) Kudos to all your brilliance and creativity.

5/5

Love it love it love it! So dark but portrayed almost... innocently.

This is horrifically beautiful. I enjoyed it immensely.
Your imagery is wonderful and the words you use flow beautifully. 5\5

A bit lengthy for my liking, but it is still beautiful.

I wish I could write like you <3

Wow...those words are just awesome! Were did you learn all that?! And the last line just fitted perfectly:
Veni, vidi, vici...just wow!

Really well written piece. Great imagery employed.

I definitely like this one! Great write :)

Excellent imagery and an interesting read.

Jay

That is amazing. Written so we'll and with such power.

This is fantastic. Your vocabulary, rhyme, and rhythm are fabulous. Veni, Vidi, Vici, aka I came, I saw, I conquered, was very fitting.

PERFECTION!

5 STARS!

Finally got to read your poem. :)
Well written! Love the imagery you used..

Cant wait to read more! :)