Don't you feel.....

Very good and with a wider message.

We can all take our mothers for granted and shouldn't.
Take care, Em

The rhyming is very decent. Wow!!! Very well crafted this write is. In this Four lines only you have described the great role of Mothers. Well Done!! 5/5.

:( Well this makes me sad. I think yes, a lot of mothers are taken for granted! Especially in the years that their children are growing up but HOPEFULLY those same children grow wise and start to understand what all their mom's have done and still do for them. I know I have. <3
Anyways, I like this - More should read it

Alka Ji
it well nice poem as well as correct.

It's great how you can fit in a lot in words so few.Absolutely love it.