by Meena Krish
...yes mothers are that and much more! They are taken for granted and it doesn't hit us until we sit, think about those times and feel. |
by Everlasting
I like the content. Though I feel that this poem could beneft with some editing just to become better. |
Thank you Lucero for your kind suggestion. |
by John Doe
It's great how you can fit in a lot in words so few.Absolutely love it. |
Thank you:) |
by Jyoti Rawat
Alka Ji |
Thank you Jyoti:) |
by Mayday
:( Well this makes me sad. I think yes, a lot of mothers are taken for granted! Especially in the years that their children are growing up but HOPEFULLY those same children grow wise and start to understand what all their mom's have done and still do for them. I know I have. <3 |
Thank you :) |
The rhyming is very decent. Wow!!! Very well crafted this write is. In this Four lines only you have described the great role of Mothers. Well Done!! 5/5. |
Thank you:) |
by Em
Very good and with a wider message. |