Beautiful as always, brought a tear to my eye. Finding it hard to find words right now but I will be back
xx

This literally gave me chill bumps. I don't remember the last time reading a poem did that to me. Amazing.

"I had earth for breakfast" - ah girl, genius line! I love how you worded this, instead of saying that you consumed the earth or you became the earth, no, it's what surrounded you even nourished you. This line and the one following it are the most thought-provoking for me, it makes me think this person you are spending time with is unclear and doubting something in their life, and you are trying to find answers in this pure, simple roots of earth.

Such hope in this poem, from the buzz of the bumblebees (which reminded me this is how you feel and know you are alive), to still recognizing those scents even if separated. Those bumblebees, those memories and dreams, are still alive and buzzing.

Eloquently written!

Very lovely. :)