by little one Dec 1, 2014
category :
Internet slang /
sadness
So sick of losing everyone that I love. |
by WW
All your poems are very raw. I've never seen poetry on here written in such a way. It's deep and personal and so I feel hesitant to critique. I feel like If you went back and reorganized them, without the textspeak, they would read better. thanks for sharing 5/5 |
by little one
Thank you. Honestly, everything I write and ever have written, I put my heart and soul into. And i write about things I'm either going thru now or have been through. I have noticed when I write sometimes that I have to go back and rearrange things so that there in a better order that makes more sense. I will be posting more soon. And by the way, I wound definitely appreciate your honest opinion as far as.a critique |