Fibonacci code, follow me down; (Senyru)

by earlgreytea   Dec 3, 2014


...

Plants

grow..

as I

Spiral down...

(Just trying to find..

..A pattern in a face I know)

and "How many rabbits will follow me down this hole?"

While the shell whispers to us; "the golden ratio (and friends) have, and will take thier toll."

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This one goes out to Senyru for giving me the motivation and idea for this poem. :)

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very clever little piece, beautifully structured.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is a very unique piece and i love the imagery that you used. very well penned and very creative use of format! Wonderfully done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    For some unknown reason, I'm good at spotting typo's in others people's poems but not on my own :?

    , and will take thier toll."

    ^ is it thier or their?

    I have to read about the fibonacci code, I'm clueless.

  • 9 years ago

    by WW

    Rad! Very beautiful. I did a poem like this called magazine that follows this sequence. I like yours better though. 5/5

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