Comments : In reply to a tortured soul

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Voted and nominated. will comment better later.

    -Mori

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    This is a long poem that doesn't have stanzas and isn't broken down but here's my comment either way:

    There was a reason I choose this as one of my picks for last week and it was this: it had imagery and emotions. Both were used to perfection and I really hope you win.

    Favorite lines were these:
    "Open eyes so long cast downwards, blinded
    by the darkness of abusive love."
    ^
    That I've gone since yea long story short it happened anyways loved your poem! 5/5

    -Mori

  • 9 years ago

    by uttAm

    Full of emotions and hope......it's just an adorable piece for me, great work nd favorited:)