The Mystic Dance

Another lovely poem from you, Alka. Such imagery in so small a piece - well done indeed. "The shimmering leaves..." is a beautiful and captivating opening to this piece which draws the reader in.
All the very best,
Ben

I love the deep imagery

"Dancing with the breeze" --lovely line

The shimmering leaves
Of the Bodhi Tree
In the broad daylight

^^I simply like that image of shimmering leaves. The tree of knowledge stands out, stretches out its branches like a peacock ready to dance...oh liked that image!

Making rustling sound
Dancing with the breeze
Bestows inner peace

^^I like how you have also introduced the sound of the tree that moves along with the breeze.

What I do feel is that maybe you could in-corporate these lines within the first stanza to make it sound and alive even more. Just my thoughts but I still like the image and the peace in it.

Keep penning Akka :)