by aubrey turner Dec 5, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I yearn for your touch, to kiss your sweet lips. I just wanna hold you close and never let you go. These miles apart make me love you even more. |
by BlueJay
Other than needing some work on format, this piece is wonderful. It has decent use of emotion and wonderful flow. There is a great word choice and great imagery as well. |
Thank you |