As common as this theme is especially with your demographic based on your profile i like that you at least attempted to put a personal spin on this piece. I love that you made this personal by talking about the marks on your left arm and how you feel towards others feeling this way. Interesting write, again despite being a common theme.

I am definitely a fan of your imagery however I do think you could have spiced the style up just a bit

Deep and felt the pain! I loved this! Thanks for sharing!