by sammiej Dec 8, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Medication! By Sammie 2006 |
by BlueJay
The rhymes here worked well, they gave a tempo to the piece and helped smooth out your flow a little bit. I like the honesty of this piece, almost like you're trying to sell your problems in the hopes that help will find its way to you. |