This is very well written. but i want to say a few things: you are not alone, if you need anyone i'm here. I like the way this poem shows the vision of how you see yourself from the inside, and not many people can manage that, so good job. I've been writing for years and sometimes i still struggle with trying to capture the image. It's not much, but i still do. anyway, good job writing this.

Love the imagery in this. Nice flow as well. Great job.