ZULEMA!!! (An Acrostic Poem)
by Robert Gardiner Dec 9, 2014
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This is a poem I was asked to write, by someone on Facebook. She had asked me, if I could do poems on names. I told her could and do, and I asked her why. she gave me this name. I asked her whom it was. She said it was her brother's girlfriend. I said ok, I'd try to work on something and this is what I came up with; |
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9 years ago
Quite adorable request and even more adorable is this poem, there is a minor thing bugging me and that's every word is capitalized I can't stand that, I know I myself do it all the time but then I go and take it away so it looks better, more professional if you will. This poem will be great if she gives it to her brother so he can give it to his girlfriend, now I love the imagery it was really out there slapping you to see it in your head (which I did it's quite stunning), the emotions were so romantic it's so touching and I'm saying this because I normally I pretty much hate romantic poetry it makes me want to vomit (no offence but I'm not the romantic gal), either way beautiful poem! 5/5
-Mori
