This is so incredible. I've read this poem so many times and just absolutely breathtaking.

Judging Comment;

A fantastically penned piece that not only shares the emotions the author has towards whoever the "you" may be but it captures the reader and entices them, especially those who are book worms and literature freaks as many people on P&Q have allowed themselves to be. It reminds me of the "Kidnap poem" by Nikki Giovanni in the way this author has used elements of their skills and crafts to describe this person or how important that person may be. It is a personal twist on so many wonderful themes and it was penned beautifully.

"and you,
the salted sea
i fell in too deep"

Simple, beautiful... :)