Oceans Alone

by PorcelainMoon   Dec 10, 2014


Dreams of her will not suffice
to grip her body like a vice
inaccurate calculations and forced abbreviations her allure silences my swaying tounge, like pointing a loaded gun
For all these years I searched for you
Unearthed unmarked roads and oceans alone
Devotion amidst, lovers delivered in stone

Framed photography of this monogamy
Depictions of lustful convictions
Freedom wears a colorless mask
Caskets harbour a heart of glass
Darkness the day she becomes of my past
My way, to pray my hair slowly greys;
with her, the last of my days.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Sighs..... this got me... Your wording gives it a rugged yet romantic edge to it....just a deep and yet lovely, unique poem. Love this!

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Well done, still feels like a dark love and would be perfect in category of dark and fantasy poems.

    inaccurate calculations and forced abbreviations her allure silences my swaying tounge, like pointing a loaded gun
    ------------- check this:
    ~inaccurate calculations and forced abbreviations
    her allure silences my swaying tounge,
    like pointing a loaded gun~

    ^^^^ It's more smoother.

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    Excellent wording and I love the rhyme scheme. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Straight-up lovely sir. XD 5/5

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