Straight-up lovely sir. XD 5/5

Excellent wording and I love the rhyme scheme. :)

Well done, still feels like a dark love and would be perfect in category of dark and fantasy poems.

inaccurate calculations and forced abbreviations her allure silences my swaying tounge, like pointing a loaded gun
------------- check this:
~inaccurate calculations and forced abbreviations
her allure silences my swaying tounge,
like pointing a loaded gun~

^^^^ It's more smoother.

Sighs..... this got me... Your wording gives it a rugged yet romantic edge to it....just a deep and yet lovely, unique poem. Love this!