Sniper

by Samuel Ernst   Dec 10, 2014


Breath,
Oh prey,
Extension of Death's hand,
To bewildered opposition in times of trouble to
Reach....
Called upon to dispatch thine lords foes.
To be unseen, to be unknown, to be without glory,
From the field to the Manor,
Let Death guide your perfect eyes.

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  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    I enjoyed this short verse very much, the introduction can't be better than this.

    Breath,
    Oh prey,
    ^^^^Very beautiful literary style to start with.
    Extentsion --- spelling error --> Extension
    Deaths hand ---> Death's hand

    The closure is indeed perfect as well, I really like the influence it makes:
    ~Let Death guide your perfect eyes.

    Thanks for sharing, write on~

    • 9 years ago

      by Samuel Ernst

      Thanks for the corrections and thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it

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