Just A Single Red Rose

by Denise   Dec 11, 2014


Just A Single Red Rose

Just a single red rose
Centered in a clear vase
Symbolizes your love for me
Keeping my heart beating in a perfect pace
Darkness is no longer a lonely place.

Just a single red rose
Surrounded by babies breath would symbolize
Your passion and tenderness that I feel with every kiss
The warmth of your hands touching my face
As you hold me in your arms, feeling your embrace.

A single red rose...
The vividness of color expressed of a "true love"
Baby, I thank my lucky stars and to God above
For giving me a chance in finding you...
A wonderful man...
So passionate
So gentle
So funny
So kind....
Because babe, you are TRULY one of a kind.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Denise

    Thanks for your advice.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    3,8 for this piece,it has potential,but the rhythm is slightly off,you need to work on punctuating stanzas and not making one long running sentence in basically four stanzas (give the reader room to breathe).

    As I said,it has potential and I love the pretty imagery,just work on those few hitches and you're on your way;)

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