Comments : Sorrow, tea and life

  • 9 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Well I know you got "cheated" into writing this, but it's really beautiful.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    I am in love with this poem......
    This is one of those poems where I'm gonna say...
    Wwoonddeeeerrrfffuuuulllllllll....
    (Now imagine me saying this)

    Sometimes I see our words, seperated
    by oceans, with nothing in common
    but the wind that pushed us
    to and fro, the ways of fate
    dancing to and fro,
    mocking our existence.
    ^ this para it touched me.... I really love the way you describe your relationship with this person.

    I also love your ending when you say that you are sad that you cannot be that persons coffee and are stuck being a cup of tea which he/she is not much interested in. (Well this is what I thought you are saying).

    Beautifully written

  • 9 years ago

    by shadow

    Amazing :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Britt

    Oh please. I cheated you into excellence!!! This is BEAUTIFUL!!!!!