Snowdrops Landing

by Baby Rainbow   Dec 12, 2014


Snowdrops created
shadows of the past,
drifting far away
to where darkness lands.

*poem of exactly 20 syllables

Saffie
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12/12/14

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    The imagery in this captures your voice and takes us on a beautiful journey. I love your nonsensical approach to this. Though it's not in the point of view of the snowflake, it almost is because you are almost the snowflake here. The snow falls, but it lands in the darkest places on the ground. The snow could and I believe is a metaphor for the cold eerie side of your past and you don't like feeling these feelings. I like the wording in this, as it is clever indeed. You speak volumes in such a beautiful short write. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Interesting write for sure

  • 9 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very nice and emotional

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the imagery in this piece and how it can be so completely versitile molded into any sort of emotion the reader wants - because despite being a nature piece there is heart and soul oozing from every word. I especially love the introduction line. Amazingly penned piece.