The Longest Day Ever

by PineappleKing   Dec 13, 2014


The day is Saturday and you are not here.
Today your at your dads and out of contact.
I can feel your hatred for him from here and I wish I could help.
The day is Saturday and you are not here.

I wish you were here in my arms and not in that den of snakes.
You fight for your life just to stay sane in a hostile environment.
I can feel your hatred for him from here and I wish I could help.
I wish you were here in my arms and not in that den of snakes.

The day is Saturday and you are not here.
Today your at your dads and out of contact.
I can feel your hatred for him from here and I wish I could help.
The day is Saturday and you are not here.

The day is Saturday and you are not here.
I can feel your hatred for him from here and I wish I could help.
I want you in my arms and nothing else will do.
Until your here, unless I see you I am on pins and needles all day.

Today is the longest day and I just want it to be over.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I love this, the refranes are awesome and work well to express what you wanted to feel. The simplicity of words makes this work well too. This person is with their dad and it seems like they do not have a good relationship, maybe it has something to do with their past? But you can feel their energy and hatred toward their father because you have such a great connection with them. But you just want to know that they are safe, and by that you want them to be safe within your arms. It is Saturday and you feel like this day is dragging on forever. I Luke this because it is relatable to a lot of people and the emotions you put into this are great. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Congrats on the third place, well penned. Nicely penned. The love and longing definitely shines through here as does the understanding that the person is not enjoying their time where they are

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