A Message in Your Inbox

by Everlasting   Dec 14, 2014


I wanted to leave a message in your inbox
And pretend that I was a courier
who galloped miles upon miles
to deliver to you
That which my heart expressed
With a kiss

But a kiss
that only in dreams have your lips
bestowed upon my own
And a kiss
that only in dreams have felt
more real
than that which I had never received
From you

Yet I wanted to leave a message in your inbox
But even though Words can touch a soul
I didn't think
leaving any message in your inbox
would ever touch you
The way I would like to do

With love...

Nov 12, 2014

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  • 10 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ugh......Luce......this is off the hook, i mean REALLY REALLY REALLY awesome........Literally cant comment other than that, this poem should be nomininated, love it.

    Sorry not the most indepth comment you'll get lol

    Amazing.

  • 10 years ago

    by nouriguess

    "to delivered to you" - A typo?
    This piece is soft. I've been struggling to write lately, and every time I read something by you, I'm inspired. Thanks. :D

    Anyway, I'll leave a better comment in the future. For now, well-done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is so sweet and pure! A lovely write... not often I read this category of poems from you.

  • 10 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Touching. I am conflicted, as though I happened upon a love note from my daughter to her interest. I wish to tell you how magnificent a write this is, but am embarrassed at the same time, to have to admit I read it, an invasion of a young girl's privacy.

    • 10 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Mr. Larry. Though it's not really an invasion of privacy as I have posted it online...

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