MT......i freaking love this write.....in the words of a wise woman.....WE SMACKED IT!

Love writing with you.....look forward to the next one :)

I freaking love this, too. You two are awesome. More please! Lol

Thiiiiiiiiiis just WONDERFUL. Im in love with it, you both did an awesome job. Im blown away!

<3 <3

Always told maple that you two have a compnnection to nature that others dont have.

Amazing to see you two writing again together!

Well, Well, Well, and I thought Andrea was my muse. *glows green with envy*

At first I thought I was going to be asked to submit my birth certificate to view this. Phew, it was just the title and not a private viewing of Animal Farm!

The first stanza starts with a delicate massage of bubbles, tickling those places only inquisitive bubbles can! Then we have mating wings - this provided me with superb colourful imagery of a dragonfly's wing, that iridescent splendour.

Now, I presume the 1st stanza was yours, getting down and dirty from the off. The 2nd stanza however, is more subtle, a lady's touch, just a flutter and a breeze; not a whirlwind of passion like yours! lol

Okay, 3rd Stanza - here you again, straight to the money shot! You really are quite something! Nakedness, spawn and quiver - I mean, could this be any more X-rated! :P It's a positive bath of goats milk full of cheerleaders and football players!!!!

Next we have a breather, Andrea's turn: Dandelions (sp) unyielding (sp) eyes and silent caresses. This is more like a lady's version of passion - not a whan-bam-thank you mam! lol

So at last this see-saw of love comes to a climatic end and who better to deliver this - Ben of course!

"bed of erotic pleasure" "unveiled secrets" Biting of lower lip and dew drops trickling down a spine.
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Actually, I think this stanza may be Andrea's, its not as hard core as the others. :P

Ben, Andrea - please put me out of my misery and let me know if I am right or wrong!

I'm off for a cold shower now!

Take care,

Michael

Micheal you make it very difficult for me to have a sneaky peaky at pnq while im at work when im dying of laughter at my desk hahaha !!!

I haven't read this in ages and yep you were right with your guesses on who wrote who!!

Ben

My my nature's sensual side has been penned so beautifully and perfectly with all its beauty! You both did a great job in bringing out the love sparks in nature...excellent!

Thank you Meena :)

Absolutely amazing x

Wow oh wow! Nature's sexual tension all out there, woooo! I think I need to cold shower myself...just saying..well done you two