Comments : Vision

  • 9 years ago

    by Britt

    This is a side of you we don't always get to see, and I absolutely love it.

    "I see no poetry in my poetry, anymore,
    but everything about him is poetry."

    Can we just take a moment and breathe this in? This is absolutely beauty. I have read this poem a handful of times and can't help but love this part the best.

    Your ending also had me swooning. You write some incredible love poetry, and I hope to see more from you!

    Searched for a critique and of course, I have none. I hope to see this on the front page!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    Just....wow. I don't even know what to say