Feeling... (Pleiades)

by Meena Krish   Dec 16, 2014


Florets of wishes you sprinkle
Forgetting not a word;
Failures don't touch or threaten when I
Follow the sun you lay before me;
Fruitful day welcomes- knowing you are near;
Forever my heart is bound with yours
For you are my sole lover

Pleiades, only one word is allowed in the title
followed by a single seven line stanza. The first
word in each line begins with the same letter as
the title.

(I know it sucks but had to write something to stop me from writing
a depressive poem)

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  • 7 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem I like it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This does not "suck", lol. It is an excellent little piece. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    This poem is truly amazing. Well! I think it is difficult to describe it's beauty. Each lines of this write are very meaningful, heart-touched and blissful. I believe that you had taken your mind beyond the heaven while writing this. Filled with great emotions of true love. You have really expressed very well that no power is greater than love. High quality work.

    You are really a terrific poet. Keep on rocking the world by your poems.

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like being introduced to new forms, and I liked this little one. I will have to try it sometime.

    Such a sweet little poem.
    Nice one!

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    W-O-W!!

    Meeeeeena!!!

    This is, in my opinion, a beautiful write!!!! - It definatly doesn't suck lol!!

    Every line is just dripping with adoration and love
    in particular......

    "Failures don't touch or threaten when I
    Follow the sun you lay before me"

    ^^^^ This is a crazy good line...soooo damn romantic, i am very jealous of this line lol

    This will go into my favs so i can go back and read it :)

    This is an interesting form too, i will definatly have a look into this.

    Awesome Writing Meena :)

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