Wonderful Meena!!!

Wow Meena !!!!
Could feel a crystal clear sparkling love.
The two souls united in a body with pure love.
You put your heart in all your writes .

Beautiful poem, Meena with lovely wording.
A dear friend once dedicated a poem to me using this format, few years ago.
I think this site is full of poetry forms and it's a joy to revive them, it helps the moods as well.
Write on~

W-O-W!!

Meeeeeena!!!

This is, in my opinion, a beautiful write!!!! - It definatly doesn't suck lol!!

Every line is just dripping with adoration and love
in particular......

"Failures don't touch or threaten when I
Follow the sun you lay before me"

^^^^ This is a crazy good line...soooo damn romantic, i am very jealous of this line lol

This will go into my favs so i can go back and read it :)

This is an interesting form too, i will definatly have a look into this.

Awesome Writing Meena :)

I like being introduced to new forms, and I liked this little one. I will have to try it sometime.

Such a sweet little poem.
Nice one!

This poem is truly amazing. Well! I think it is difficult to describe it's beauty. Each lines of this write are very meaningful, heart-touched and blissful. I believe that you had taken your mind beyond the heaven while writing this. Filled with great emotions of true love. You have really expressed very well that no power is greater than love. High quality work.

You are really a terrific poet. Keep on rocking the world by your poems.

This does not "suck", lol. It is an excellent little piece. Well done.

Beautiful poem I like it.