Devil's Dance

by ShadowsEmber   Dec 16, 2014


There's something about how we moved when we danced,
that brief sense of comfort, love, and ease.

Our dance flowed with passion and security,
though like a song, ended abruptly.

For the longest time,
we did not dance again.

The music has began to start back up,
that same ol' song.

And though I wish to leave the room,
there's a force not even God can stop.

And just like that,
my world goes spinning again.

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  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like the setup to this piece as well as the style and use of flow. Your word choice is interesting, very you. The piece itself is interesting. You've captured the Brandon story and essance very very well and you have penned yet another well done write.

  • 9 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I found this poem quite adorable I know it's about a relationship that's in one simple word: "complicated". I think the couplets were very nice and the grammar was perfect there was in one particular part a comma needed but besides that it was quite adorable! The emotions were there, the imagery was beautiful, and this poem didn't seem forced, by the way the flow was nice sometimes I think it was bumpy but that's just me being picky but still beautiful thanks for making this poem 5/5

    -Mori

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