I found this poem quite adorable I know it's about a relationship that's in one simple word: "complicated". I think the couplets were very nice and the grammar was perfect there was in one particular part a comma needed but besides that it was quite adorable! The emotions were there, the imagery was beautiful, and this poem didn't seem forced, by the way the flow was nice sometimes I think it was bumpy but that's just me being picky but still beautiful thanks for making this poem 5/5

-Mori

I like the setup to this piece as well as the style and use of flow. Your word choice is interesting, very you. The piece itself is interesting. You've captured the Brandon story and essance very very well and you have penned yet another well done write.