I Knead You

by JaneDoeWrites   Dec 18, 2014


You are like sunday morning,
a simper sun peeping through
the bedroom blinds as we nap
like lazy cats in it's warmth.

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A/N: syllable form of 4 lines with 7 syllables each. Just wanted to write something fun (:

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  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    I love your title..

    'I knead you' which also reads as I need you... Uwoowww...
    Loved it. :-D

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Crystal, This poem is great for such a short write The imagery is vivid and outstanding. I love the use of the word simper as well. Not many people will know what it means, but you used it well to describe the sun and used it well with the rest of the poem as well. The poem as a whole tells me that it is a Sunday morning and the sun is warm and bright. actually that is the metaphor. You are describing a person with whom you are speaking to, a person that always has a smile on their face or a person who always brings a smile to your face. either way. The nap part tells me this person is warm and cuddly, and you just love to be around them. I love this poem for its shortness but its radiates a strong message of happiness.

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