Naaaaaanaaaaaaa!!!!!

I so love this poem, no matter what you write you always conjure up the most amazing emotions and images.......

"I watered then,
my solid face,
cried some spirit,
lost my breath...
I wept some life,
sobbed some death."

^^^^^^^^^^^^
Just off the Hook!!!

Awesome writing :))

السلاÙ... عليكÙ...
Your poetry never changes
The uniqueness is there and I can tell you've wrote it without having to check

Yeah......Nana knows how to sock it to me.....sighs. Love this!

Love this!

I could relate to this, and loved the rap type of flow it had to it, and the layout!

Nice job!