by Emilia Jul 6, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No one can hear me now, |
by Robert
Well I think at should have been on. The rest seemed to flow real good but like alot of your work you seem to take the victims perspective. I don't know because of the power of emotion you have or you just feel that way. It gave me a hazy picture here and there but nothing abit of revision can't fix... |
this is so painful, and sad... but i like the poem.. |
Took my breath away, it's so deep and sad!!! I totally relate, I think about suicide every day.....Hope that you aer feeling better??? I'm here if you need to talk to some one =0) |
by Carmen
the middle flowed really great, but the end was sorta forced. either way, i still give it a 5! |
so well written but so sad, in my opinion, great one. keep writing, this one was powerful to me. |