Blood On My Bathroom Floor

by Emilia   Jul 6, 2004


No one can hear me now,
No one cares If I cry
I just sit there all alone
And everything that meant something is gone
I can feel my tears at my cheek
And I can see my blood on the bathroom floor
If I can't live for you I can't live this life anymore

Now I can see your face right in front of me
Now I cry even more because I know you didn't love me
not even a little bit not even at all

The bathtub is cold or is it my soul?
The water is red my body is white
I can see the light on the "other side" shining so bright
I know I'm leaving soon
I look out through the window I can see the moon

And for a minute I wish I was there
With no problem and no fear
I look at my wrists and I can see the blood running down into the water
And then I begin to feel more weak
And more tears are running down my cheek

Now I cry until I can't cry anymore
I'm sorry, what I've done to you was wrong
Good bye darling, So long

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Well I think at should have been on. The rest seemed to flow real good but like alot of your work you seem to take the victims perspective. I don't know because of the power of emotion you have or you just feel that way. It gave me a hazy picture here and there but nothing abit of revision can't fix...

  • this is so painful, and sad... but i like the poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Took my breath away, it's so deep and sad!!! I totally relate, I think about suicide every day.....Hope that you aer feeling better??? I'm here if you need to talk to some one =0)

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    the middle flowed really great, but the end was sorta forced. either way, i still give it a 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    so well written but so sad, in my opinion, great one. keep writing, this one was powerful to me.