I can see why this is one of your favourites, seriously, i thought your word choice was wonderful and the rhyming scheme flowed perfectly and the tone you set for this piece is excellent, i mean.......

"O, Amazon Queen
such reckless stare in your eyes.
Deceiving your enemies,
with your enchanting disguise."
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Love this!!!
Awesome Write.

I agree with the mouse, I do enjoy reading a poem that has a good flow to it, and is quite exciting to read.

I like the use of "O" at the beginning of the stanzas, and how each stanza has the repetition, but also something new to add.

Great work.

Whoa!! This lady seems like quite a force to be reckon with! I really wouldn't want to mess with her! :o I really like this. It's so sharp, Very clean-cut and awesome piece!

5/5

I doubt I can write with such rigorous structure.

If you were to take the second verse of each stanza that would be an amazing poem:

"Such beauty you behold,
Chosen warrior since birth.
With your double-edged spear,
For those who intrude.
Mighty Goddess of War,
O, woman of power,
Such reckless stare in your eyes,
No such thing as serene."

This is different from your usual writes. It had a very modern feel about it...like an anime character or something...not sure? really did enjoy this one from you, also liked the repitition of O Amazon Queen. Well done.

Beautifully written 5/5

This is really amazing. How perfectly and well you have written this! Wow!! The strong Queen riding on her horse and slicing down all the enemies she passed by into the pool of blood. Great stuff. And yes, the beauty of this poem is at his best.

This is my best Stanza

O, Amazon Queen
such reckless stare in your eyes.
Deceiving your enemies,
with your enchanting disguise.

You have expressed how strong a woman can be. Being a woman doesn't mean you just depend upon others. Good work

You are really a very decent poet with a very impressive thinking power. 5/5.

Great, original content and delivered with an excellent, rhyming flow. Well done and all the best
Ben