Numbness
by ShadowsEmber Dec 23, 2014
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The sting of when your eyes are swollen and raw. |
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9 years agoby BlueJay
I think your first line needs to be broken into two but otherwise everything about this piece is wonderful, especially its simplicity. I love the way your voice comes through and that's where the emotion is - not in the words. Nice little write
