Oh no! Another one! What an impact at the end, such a powerful way to end!

I like the opening here, I was in love with that idea of looking forward, and not turning back, and then you mention the temptations that can lead you back, but you know it will only lead to darkness.

I saw your motivation for this poem, the song by L, quite impressed how you managed to come up with this from the song, you have a real true gift of being able to make poetry from prompts.

Really love the comparison between your inside world and outside world. Nicely done.

Enjoyed this one too!