Silly Lines

by Maple Tree   Dec 24, 2014


We share sorrow, a place we know well,
romantic expressions, in darkness we dwell.

Lovers born, time of the hippy
native new yorker meets, a mixed breed gypsy.

This is crap and I am done
I'll write tomorrow, in the morning sun.

A free thinking woman, I let it flow
you are the rhymer, a gift you can show.

I lay my pen down, these words are making me blue,
I'll stick to metaphors, and leave the rhyme to you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh lol...I'm still smiling reading this :P

  • 11 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh lol...I'm still smiling reading this :P

  • 11 years ago

    by michelle

    You are a good writer! Impressed!

    I haven't wrote poetry in a long while, but getting back into the swing of things :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Though this is supposed to be a silly poem, it is actually well written. The rhyming is subtle yes but it works well to make the poem flow better, you don't really stumble when reading this. This seems like it is a personal poem of sorts, but in it there is emotional ties of feelings, you might feel sorrow at first but overall you have memories of falling in love. Though you might be opposites, they say opposites attract and you did. I love here how each line can be powerful on it's own term. This is well penned, 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by gumshuda

    That is the whole idea behind my message...

    Smile
    Smile and contaminate this world with smiling.

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