LMAO You are so silly when you try to rhyme. Good idea:

Lets leave the rhyming to me,
and go on your metaphoric sea.

:-) <3

Aunty Andrea you were supposed to smile the whole day... Not share sorrow or dwell in darkness. :-(

'This is crap and I am done'
*that made me smile :-P

This poem is actually funny... Don't leave rhyming aunty ... We all will get something funny to read..

That is the whole idea behind my message...

Smile
Smile and contaminate this world with smiling.

Though this is supposed to be a silly poem, it is actually well written. The rhyming is subtle yes but it works well to make the poem flow better, you don't really stumble when reading this. This seems like it is a personal poem of sorts, but in it there is emotional ties of feelings, you might feel sorrow at first but overall you have memories of falling in love. Though you might be opposites, they say opposites attract and you did. I love here how each line can be powerful on it's own term. This is well penned, 5/5

You are a good writer! Impressed!

I haven't wrote poetry in a long while, but getting back into the swing of things :)

Oh lol...I'm still smiling reading this :P

Oh lol...I'm still smiling reading this :P